ABSTRACTS: 1. Lucie Vorlickova Persons with lumbar disc herniation and nerve - [SB1] root syndrome form a considerable part of patients [SB2] spectrum in the neurologist and physiotherapist clinics. The aim of this research was [SB3] to evaluate the influence of disc herniation on the values of vibratory sensation and to determine the values of the vibratory sensation [SB4] differences between a lower extremity with root syndrom[INS: e :INS] and a lower extremity without nerve -[SB5] root syndrome. Vibrameter type IV was used for measurements. The research group consisted of 15 probands (age 41.53 ± 12.77) with L4/L5 or L5/S1 disc herniation diagnosis. The control group consisted of[SB6] 15 probands (age 37.33± 14,05) without any chronic back pain. With the statistical analysis of the values there [DEL: were found :DEL] significantly higher vibratory sensation [INS: were found :INS] in patien[INS: t :INS] s with disc hernia. [INS: Similarly, :INS] [DEL: There were found :DEL] significantly higher vibratory sensation[INS: s :INS] [INS: were found :INS] in the lower limb with nerve[DEL: :DEL] -root syndrome in all of the location[INS: s :INS] (metatarsophalangeal joint of the thumb, malleolus medialis and tuberositas tibiae), with [INS: the :INS] exce[DEL: r :DEL] ption of [INS: the :INS] spina iliaca anterior superior. This study indicates the possibility of using vibratory sensation testing as a tool [DEL: that can :DEL] [INS: to :INS] help improve [DEL: the :DEL] diagnosis and therefore [DEL: a :DEL] treatment [DEL: method :DEL] for patients with disc hernia. [INS: :INS] [DEL: :DEL] 2. Jana Kopecka Molecular characterization of brewing and wine yeast strains in the Czech Republic The hybrid origin of lager yeast causes problems in [INS: the :INS] determination of the technologically diverse species S. pastorianus and S. cerevisiae. Wine and brewing yeast S. cerevisiae could be differentiate[INS: d :INS] [DEL: on :DEL] [INS: at :INS] the DNA level. In our study we chose[INS: the :INS] FLO and HIS4 gene[INS: s :INS] , [INS: and :INS] the regions ITS, RRL2 and [SB7] YBR033w and mtDNA as target sequences. A group of 28 brewing, wine and type yeast strains [DEL: was :DEL] [INS: were :INS] analyzed [DEL: by :DEL] [INS: using :INS] PCR and RFLP techniques. Detection [SB8] of flocculation genes did not document [DEL: any :DEL] [INS: incidences of :INS] species-specific representation in any of the strain[INS: s :INS] under study. Gene LgFLO, considered as typical for lager yeast, was [INS: also :INS] detected [DEL: also :DEL] in ale yeast. Other analyses led to an identical species classification only in 7 yeast strains. Using digestion of the ITS region, 26 strains, including all of lager yeast were identified as S. cerevisiae; this region is thus unsuitable for identification of industrial yeast strains. Identification of ale and lager yeast should partially reflect the maximum temperature of growth. However, growth at different temperatures did not allow for reliable differentiation. Digestion of mtDNA with 4 different enzymes resulted in 9-12 restriction pattern[INS: s :INS] . Identical pattern have 4 out of 9 ale with lager strain[SB9] ; wine yeast exhibited different restriction pattern from brewing and type strains. [INS: :INS] [DEL: :DEL] 3. Petra Amchova IMPACT OF PRENATAL EXPOSURE TO MODAFINIL ON BEHAVIOURAL AND IMMUNE FUNCTIONS IN MICE Modafinil (MDF), a psychostimulant drug, is often abused by [INS: the :INS] young generation [SB10] in fertile age [SB11] and thus there is an increasing importance to assess its potential [INS: as regards :INS] developmental toxicity. This study investigated[SB12] influence of chronic prenatal and/or postnanal exposure to MDF on anxiety levels, locomotor activity and immune function in adult male mice. Pregnant female mice were given nine daily doses of MDF (50 mg/kg p.o.) or saline (SAL, 10 ml/kg p.o.). The same dosage regimen was used in [SB13] their adult male offspring. Thus, there were four experimental groups: MDF- and SAL-treated offspring from MDF- and SAL-treated mothers. Horizontal (distance travelled) and vertical (rearings) locomotor activity [DEL: was :DEL] [INS: were :INS] recorded in the open field test as follows: Day 1 – naïve animals,[SB14] Day 8 – acute dose of MDF or SAL, [SB15] Day 15 – one week of repeated administration. Anxiety was assessed as percentage of entries to open and closed arms in the elevated plus maze with the same schedule as in the open field. [SB16] The leukocyte phagocytosis was examined by zymosan induced and luminol-aided chemiluminiscence assay from blood samples. The distance travelled and the number of rearings in [INS: the :INS] offspring of mothers who received MDF were lower than those of[INS: the :INS] control[INS: group :INS] [DEL: s :DEL] . However, postnatal MDF treatment [DEL: :DEL] increased these behavioural parameters in both offspring groups. Prenatal treatment with MDF increased % of entries [SB17] to closed arms compared to SAL prenatal administration. This anxiety-like behaviour was not [DEL: changed :DEL] [INS: altered :INS] after acute [DEL: n :DEL] or chronic postnatal MDF administration. The phagocytic activity of leukocytes was inhibited in the offspring of MDF mothers regardless of [INS: the :INS] postnatal treatment[INS: received :INS] . We can conclude[INS: , therefore, :INS] that the prenatal exposition of mice to modafinil induced both behavioural and immune toxicity.[INS: :INS] [INS: :INS] [DEL: :DEL] 4. Martina Reslova Possibilities of using Test of Colour Semantic Differential for research into o[SB18] rganizational c[SB19] ulture The aim of this article is to show [INS: the :INS] possibility of using a combination of The Value Survey Module 1994 (VSM 94) and Test of Colour Semantic Differential (TCSD) for research into organizational culture. The data obtained from TCSD shows,[SB20] how employees consciously rated and unconsciously perceived expressions related to Hofstede’s cultural dimensions (Power distance, Individualism versus collectivism, Masculinity versus femininity, Uncertainty avoidance and Long-term orientation), or more precisely how they identify [SB21] themselves with the researched values. The results of the VSM 94 enabled [DEL: us :DEL] [INS: the researchers :INS] to determine which poles of the cultural dimensions a particular working group is getting closer to[SB22] . The conclusion of this article focuses on advantages and disadvantages of TCSD as well as the possibilities of its more focused use for research into organizational culture. TCSD is not currently used widely for [INS: research into :INS] organizational culture [DEL: research :DEL] although it has many [DEL: possibilities of :DEL] [INS: practical :INS] use[INS: s :INS] thanks to [SB23] the ability to work with respondent’s [SB24] unconsciousness in connection with a culture and traditions. [DEL: :DEL] 5. Yen-Hsuan Huang Control the Literature: An Analysis of Judges' Social Network[SB25] The mechanism of Taiwan’s[SB26] literary awards is an important issue both in cultural sociology and Taiwanese literature. Since 1976, literary awards have taken literary clubs and magazines’ places to define the frontier of fine literature. [SB27] At that time, it also meant that the government [DEL: gave :DEL] [INS: presented :INS] a model of politically correct literary works in a more gentle way. Nowadays, the form of literary awards still exists and plays an important role in selecting fine literature writers.[INS: :INS] Existing research uses text analysis to show that the texts which [DEL: the :DEL] [INS: are written by the :INS] recipients [DEL: write :DEL] [INS: and those produced by :INS] [DEL: and the ones which the :DEL] judges [DEL: write :DEL] are very similar. Existing research also points out [SB28] how the judges reproduce [SB29] themselves by choosing similar works. However, there is little research [INS: which :INS] shows that literary awards are controlled by [DEL: few :DEL] judges. Moreover, judges are quite similar [DEL: with :DEL] [INS: to :INS] each other.[SB30] Hence, we predict these two hypotheses can be confirmed by the data from “The Almanac of Taiwan Literature”. We analyze the name lists of literary awards which were held in 2010 to show that judges repeat in different patterns by religion and by category[SB31] . We also analyze the traits of the judges to show that they are nearly identical. Therefore, this research shows that [DEL: the :DEL] [INS: a :INS] “judges’ clique” exists. The consequence[DEL: s :DEL] of this research help refine the research [SB32] on the mechanism of literary awards in Taiwan. The history of literary awards and recent attempts to eliminate[INS: this :INS] “judges’ clique” will also be discussed. [DEL: :DEL] [DEL: :DEL] 6. Pavlina Tesarova „SLICE OF LIFE“ AND ITS EDUCATIONAL IMPACT ON RECIPIENT[INS: S :INS] : [INS: A :INS] CASE [INS: STUDY :INS] OF GERMAN AND JAPANESE ADVERTISING Originally used as a theatrical term, a “slice of life” depicts real everyday life [DEL: and :DEL] situations in which individuals, families and groups of people commonly find themselves[DEL: in :DEL] . This concept [SB33] is popular and [INS: is :INS] used worldwide[INS: ; :INS] [DEL: , :DEL] to [INS: a :INS] certain extent[INS: , it is :INS] also [INS: found :INS] in the [INS: discourse of :INS] advertising[DEL: discourse :DEL] .[INS: :INS] This paper deals with [SB34] the choice and usage of specific linguistic means [INS: that are :INS] characteristic of this variety of [SB35] advertising. It makes use of comparison of German and Japanese television advertising[INS: campaigns :INS] . With sociolinguistic approach and on the background of two distinctive cultures, this case study analyzes German and Japanese television advertising from the year 2013[SB36] . It also discusses [INS: the :INS] educational impact of the said approach on the recipient[INS: s :INS] .[SB37] [INS: :INS] 7. Martin Gajdos A c[SB38] omparison of effective and functional connectivity methods in fMRI Functional m[SB39] [SB40] agnetic resonance imaging (fMRI) is [INS: a fairly :INS] recent important method, used in neuroimaging. The [DEL: first :DEL] [INS: primary :INS] aim of this thesis is to develop[INS: a :INS] software tool for [INS: the :INS] comparison of two methods for functional and effective connectivity estimation. The basics of magnetic resonance imaging, fMRI, basic [SB41] terms of fMRI experiments and generally methods of functional and effective connectivity are described in this thesis. [INS: Specifically, the following are :INS] [DEL: In detail :DEL] are mentioned [INS: in detail: :INS] methods of dynamic causal modeling (DCM), Granger causal modeling (GCM) and independent component analysis (ICA). [INS: The :INS] [DEL: P :DEL] [INS: p :INS] ractical implementations of DCM in toolbox SMP and ICA in toolbox GIFT are also shown. Monte Carlo simulations are performed in purpose [SB42] to describe behavior of DCM and GCM in dependence on several parameters. Then the concept and realization of software tool for simulating connectivity and comparison of DCM and GCM are described. The second part is focused on [SB43] DCM, a method used to estimate effective connectivity on BOLD-fMRI data, introduced by Friston et al., 2003. The aim of this [DEL: part :DEL] [INS: section of the thesis :INS] is to test how several properties of simulated BOLD signals, such as signal to noise ratio (SNR), sampling period (repetition time TR), and scaling of input signal, affect the robustness of Variational Bayesian inference under Laplace assumptions. Finally[INS: , :INS] [INS: [SB44] :INS] [INS: the :INS] results [INS: pertaining to :INS] [DEL: of :DEL] DCM and GCM comparison[INS: s :INS] ,[INS: the :INS] [DEL: results of :DEL] Monte Carlo simulations and [DEL: results of :DEL] tests of the robustness of Variational Bayesian inference under Laplace assumptions are discussed. [DEL: :DEL] 8. Michal Krcal LEVEL OF INFORMATION SUPPORT OF REVERSE LOGISTICS IN CZECH COMPANIES: CURRENT STATE AND IMPLICATIONS In recent years, the area of reverse logistics has been continuously attracting larger and larger [SB45] scientific and managerial audience. However, some aspects of reverse logistics management have not [SB46] received proper attention [DEL: so :DEL] [INS: thus :INS] far. Information support of reverse logistics belongs to these [DEL: not fully :DEL] [INS: topics which have yet to be fully :INS] developed[DEL: topics :DEL] . Although, some efforts towards studying[INS: the :INS] impact of information support on organizational performance and categorizing types of information technology used for information support [DEL: were :DEL] [INS: have been :INS] made, the situation regarding the intensity of research in the field of reverse logistics is concentrated only in particular fields and countries. Therefore, the [DEL: goal :DEL] [INS: aim :INS] of this study is to explore the level of information support of reverse logistics among [DEL: the :DEL] Czech companies, [INS: to :INS] compare the findings of this study with studies from other countries, and to identify possible barriers that prohibit the information support of reverse logistics. For the purpose of obtaining the data, two open and two closed questions as a part of a larger research that was focused on reverse logistics in general were sent to 167 companies of various sizes and industries. Questions that [DEL: were :DEL] targeted [DEL: on :DEL] information support of reverse logistics were designed according to problems that were not satisfactor[INS: il :INS] y solved during our previous theoretical research and literature analysis. The data were analyzed using descriptive statistical methods and correlations. The results of this study show[SB47] that the level of information support in the surveyed companies is below one third. Simultaneously, the bigger the company is, the more likely they [INS: are to :INS] have implemented some kind of [SB48] information support. The most [INS: commonly :INS] used [DEL: type of :DEL] information support is Enterprise Resource Planning system. This fact confirms [INS: the :INS] findings of other studies. Therefore, with regard[DEL: s :DEL] to previous studies, that [SB49] show that reverse logistics has a positive impact on organizational performance, and due to revealed low level of information support of reverse logistics in this study[SB50] , Czech companies should try to increase the level of the support in order to become more competitive [INS: i :INS] [DEL: o :DEL] n foreign markets. [INS: :INS] Keywords: reverse logistics, information support, quantitative study, descriptive analysis, Czech Republic [INS: :INS] [INS: :INS] 9. Igor Kiss Tourist business ([DEL: further in text as :DEL] [INS: hereafter :INS] tourism) has [INS: an :INS] important position in the Slovak national economy. Tourism [DEL: as such :DEL] provides [INS: a considerable number of :INS] [DEL: great part of working places on :DEL] [INS: jobs in :INS] the labour market and helps with [INS: the :INS] improvement of national regions. On the other hand, tourism has the worst position in the economy, regarding to the crisis time. [SB51] Tourism is the first sector[DEL: , :DEL] that loses its consumers [INS: during an economic crisis :INS] and is [INS: often :INS] also the last sector [INS: to re :INS] gain[DEL: ing back :DEL] its full strength. The main aim of our study[DEL: , :DEL] is to give a theoretical and practical overview o[INS: f :INS] [DEL: n :DEL] the importance of the tourist business for the Slovak national economy, to show its share on the Slovak gross domestic product (GDP) and to show the main reasons[DEL: , :DEL] why [DEL: is :DEL] the performance [DEL: of tourism :DEL] [INS: is :INS] falling[INS: . Additionally, we will :INS] [DEL: , :DEL] [DEL: as well as to give our :DEL] [INS: make :INS] suggestion[INS: s :INS] [INS: on :INS] [DEL: for :DEL] restoring its strong position in [INS: the :INS] national economy. In the first section, we will show the position of tourism from the global and national point of view. In the second section, we will show the main problems[INS: that are currently associated with :INS] [DEL: , :DEL] tourism is nowadays dealing with[SB52] . In the third section, we will show the impact of [INS: the :INS] crisis on the tourist sector, as well as the reaction on the global economic crisis in Czech Republic, Poland and Hungary. In the fourth part, we will use economic and statistical data to evaluate the potential impact of reduced value added tax (VAT) rate and the use of travel vouchers on the tourist sector, as well as on the Slovak national economy. 10. Jakub Valcik Title: A Key-Pose Similarity Algorithm for Motion Data Retrieval Abstract: Analysis of human motion data is an important [SB53] task in many research fields such as sport, medicine, security research, and computer animation. In order to fully exploit motion databases for further processing, one needs effective and efficient retrieval methods to identify similar chunk[INS: s :INS] of motion in [INS: the :INS] whole database. However, such the [SB54] retrieval task is difficult primarily due to the spatio-temporal variances of human motions and due to the rapidly increasing volume of motion data. In this paper, we represent motion features by joint-angle rotations and propose a novel content-based retrieval algorithm not requiring any textual annotations or additional knowledge [DEL: about :DEL] [INS: of :INS] the data. The algorithm is capable of retrieving similar motions that may exhibit spatial as well as temporal variations with respect to a query-by-example motion. We analyse [INS: the :INS] time complexity of the proposed algorithm and evaluate its effectiveness by comparing the search results against user-defined ground truth. [DEL: :DEL] [DEL: :DEL] [INS: :INS] 11. Huiping Hsu Analysis of Czech Cultural Diplomacy: A Case of Cultural Tourism After the collapse of communism, it has been a long time [DEL: that :DEL] [INS: since :INS] the former socialist countries accelerated the[INS: ir :INS] political and economic transitions and focus[INS: ed :INS] on the development of small states in Central and Eastern Europe. [INS: The :INS] Czech use culture as [DEL: its :DEL] [INS: a :INS] diplomatic strategy [DEL: and :DEL] [INS: to :INS] highlight [INS: that :INS] Czech is part of Europe in order to change its image of former socialist countries. Moreover, Czech [SB55] creates its new national image and builds Prague as a city of culture[INS: , with the :INS] [DEL: ; :DEL] aim to make Czech [DEL: become :DEL] a cultural state. This study used [SB56] historical approach, literature analysis and policy analysis to analyze the status of home support and [DEL: the :DEL] promotion in the international world, and its impact [DEL: for :DEL] [INS: on :INS] national interests and national image. In addition, culture is one of [INS: the :INS] soft power[INS: s :INS] of a nation [SB57] and a nation encourages its cultural tourism as a method of diplomacy to achieve national interests increasing and international cooperation[SB58] . Therefore, this study presents [DEL: that :DEL] how Czech applies cultural tourism as a way of cultural diplomacy and how Czech applies cultural tourism to create its national image.[SB59] [INS: :INS] 12. Lukas Chrast EnBase t[SB60] echnology for recombinant protein expression Heterologous expression of recombinant proteins represents[INS: an :INS] important part of modern biotechnology. The easiest way [SB61] [DEL: how :DEL] to produce these proteins is [INS: by :INS] using bacterial expression systems. EnBase medium technology combines cultivation in shake flask and fed-batch like culture, due to [INS: the :INS] enzymatic release of glucose from starch during the cultivation. In this study, [INS: the :INS] expression[INS: s :INS] of eleven characterized haloalkane dehalogenases using different media [DEL: was :DEL] [INS: were :INS] tested. Cultures in EnBase medium resulted in higher cell densities (up to OD 55). Comparison[INS: s :INS] of yields from conventional LB medium and the new EnBase B tablet medium revealed 15-fold to 35-fold improvement per liter of medium while using EnBase. At the same time, enhanced solubility was observed with EnBase B medium. Such an impact on culture productivity as well as yields reaching 2 grams per liter make EnBase B [INS: an :INS] efficient medium for biotechnological production of recombinant proteins. [DEL: :DEL] [DEL: :DEL] 13. Pavlína Balatá Essential m[SB62] ethods used during building business excellence in production factory Abstract The [SB63] article is brought by [SB64] description and [SB65] definition methods and tools which can be used during way to excellent quality.[SB66] [INS: The :INS] [DEL: L :DEL] [INS: l :INS] ast century has been associated [INS: with :INS] forward[INS: - :INS] [DEL: :DEL] looking technology and trailblazing inventions that have made [DEL: her :DEL] history. [DEL: No, :DEL] [INS: Yet, :INS] when tools and methods are defined, right usage Best Practice (BP) and Quality-Mindset in praxis is often depreciated. This case study provides [INS: a :INS] collection of integration methods and tools used in production factory high-level on domestic and national market.[SB67] [INS: The e :INS] [DEL: E :DEL] ffective sharing of BP and Q-Mindset can help [INS: a :INS] company establish benchmarks, identifying replace[INS: ments for :INS] deficient practices, maintain process capability, reduce reinvention, duplication and risk, save cost through better efficiency and productivity,[INS: and :INS] avoid costly mistakes. Many models have been introduced [DEL: for :DEL] [INS: to help secure :INS] organizational excellence. Among these models, BP is able to improve the principles of Total Quality Management (TQM) for production organizations. The enhancement of organizational quality knowledge and improvement of quality knowledge management is one of the important criteria of [DEL: the :DEL] BP. The aim of this study was [SB68] to evaluate [INS: the :INS] [DEL: of :DEL] quality [INS: of :INS] knowledge management in one of [INS: the :INS] production factory based on the Excellence model (with confirmation European Foundation for Quality Management (EFQM)). [INS: :INS] [INS: :INS] Methods: This qualitative and cross-sectional descriptive-analytical study was [DEL: performed :DEL] [INS: conducted :INS] in 2011. The statistical population [DEL: was :DEL] [INS: included :INS] managers, employees and people from production, [INS: together with :INS] documents and processes of national industrial organization with sub[INS: - :INS] [DEL: :DEL] branch[INS: es :INS] in [INS: the :INS] Czech Republic. Data were collected [DEL: by :DEL] [INS: using :INS] the standard checklist of excellence model created by following company[SB69] (the version of 2010-2011). Data were analyzed based on the Network analysis ([SB70] used from reason objective determined whether elements of the quality mindset [DEL: are :DEL] influence [DEL: on :DEL] [INS: the :INS] observed elements and profile these elements according information, creating influence analysis with numbers active sum, passive sum, every element had assigned position (one point) in a portfolio matrix[SB71] ). The results were plotted and analyzed [DEL: by :DEL] [INS: using :INS] Excel 2007 [DEL: S :DEL] [INS: s :INS] oftware based on the obtained scores in the matrix. Results: Thirst [SB72] the studied company (management level) gained 81 (81, 46%) scores out of 100 points of the thirst section "Company goals" criterion. In addition, the gained 66 (66,85%) of the score of "Company standards", 47 (47,75%) of the score of "Company cooperation", 67 (67,75%) of the score of "Company Leadership" and total results was 62 (62,02%) of the score of "Q-Mindset of the company". In production (employee) was 89 (89,11%) of the score of "company goals", section “information flow” was scores 91 (91,32%) and section “company standards was score 79 (79,36%). Conclusion: The studied company has taken appropriate measure[INS: s :INS] in infrastructure development by the definition of Quality - Mindset of the company, but promotion in leadership and cooperation and efficient use of new[INS: ly :INS] built criteria teams and new department[INS: s :INS] (which will be developed best praxis) is recommended. ________________________________ [SB1]Use the hyphen without spaces on either side [it is the dash that is used this way] [SB2]Apostrophe missing – however, avoid the possessive apostrophe in academic writing, wherever possible [SB3]Present tense is usually used to report on research [SB4]Minimise reptition [SB5]See comment SB1 [SB6]Avoid reptition [SB7]Superflous? [SB8]? Investigations/Studies/ [SB9]rephrase [SB10]contemporary youth [SB11]? [SB12]Use the present tense [SB13]injected into (...?) [SB14]use semi-colons here [SB15]see comment SB14 [SB16]unclear; this needs to be rephrased [SB17]? [SB18]capitalise [SB19]capitalise [SB20]not needed [SB21]tense inconsistency: earlier, you use the past tense (rated) [SB22]more closely aligned with [= more formal] [SB23]colloquial [SB24]avoid the possessive apostrophe in academic writing where possible [SB25]In order to avoid the possessive apostrophe, this could be rephrased to read: ‚the Social Network of Judges‘ [SB26]See above comment re the use of this punctuation mark [SB27]rephrase [SB28]avoid phrasal verbs in academic writing [SB29]?? [SB30]This statemnent is somewhat vague: in what way are they similar? [SB31]rephrase [SB32]rephrase [SB33]term...? [SB34]colloquail; avoid the use of phrasal verbs in academic writing [SB35]? [SB36]Is this correct...? [SB37]Do you mean yourself here, or viewers of TV? [SB38]It is common practice to capitalise content words in headings and sub-headings [SB39]Capitalise the letters that make up [SB40]MRI [SB41]Avoid repetition [SB42]? [SB43]Use the present simple tense [SB44]In the final section/part? [or do you mean in summary/conclusion?] [SB45]Avoid repetitious phrases of this kind in academic writing [instead, here you could write: ‚an increasingly large...‘] [SB46]Where possible, rephrase your sentences so as to avoid the use of ‚not‘; e.g. here, you could write: ‚...have failed to receive proper attention thus far.‘ [SB47]Be consistent in your tense usage: earlier, you use the past tense – and here the present; it is typical to use the present tense when presenting research outcomes/results [SB48]colloquial [SB49]? this? [SB50]rephrase [SB51]rephrase [SB52]colloquial [SB53]try to be more specific: why is it important, for example? Because it’s valuable? [SB54]? [SB55]Unclear as to whether you mean the people or the language [SB56]Present tense [SB57]‚power‘ in what way? [SB58]rephrase [SB59]rephrase [SB60]capitalise content words in headings/sub-headings [SB61]colloquial [the least complicated way/the swiftest way...] [SB62]capitalise contents words in headings and sub-headings [SB63]This (?) [SB64]? [SB65]Use between the last two items in the list [SB66]unclear [SB67]rephrase [SB68]use the present tense to introduce your study/research [SB69]? [SB70]Do not use brackets/parentheses unless totally necessary [SB71]unclear [SB72]?