SEMINAR 1 ACADEMIC PRESENTATION Structure of the presentation process PREPARATION – presentation analysis, planning your time, purpose, topic, audience REHEARSAL – phrases, timing, body language TITLE – selection INTRODUCTION – your name, position, purpose, topic/title, length of time, handling questions, outline MAIN BODY – coherent and logical structure, natural transition between main points ENDING – signal to end, summary, conclusion, recommendations, closing DISCUSSION – welcome questions, think before answering, accept criticism, reply positively CLOSING – thank the audience 1. TITLE A title must attract your audience, describe your topic clearly, and give a precise idea about what to expect in the presentation. Here are some useful points to keep in mind when creating your title. 1. Avoid using redundant words and phrases such as “a study on” or “an investigation of”. 2. Avoid using abbreviations and jargon. 3. Avoid using “cute” or sensational titles. 4. Avoid being too vague or too general. Task Look at the following examples of titles of presentations. Which of these can enable you to predict the content of the presentations? 1. Noise Stress and Human Behaviour 2. The Billion Dollar Question! 3. Industrial Policies of Industrial Countries 4. Out of the Oceans and on to Faster Bicycles 5. The Persistent Stereotype: Children’s Images of Scientists 2. INTRODUCTION The introduction is a very important - perhaps the most important - part of your presentation. This is the first impression that your audience have of you. You should concentrate on getting your introduction right. It usually consists of: a) GREETING b) INTRODUCING ONE´S NAME AND POSITIONS c) TOPIC / TITLE / SUBJECT d) PURPOSE e) TIME f) OUTLINE g) VISUAL AIDS h) QUESTIONS Task Match the structural points with the sentences from the text. (1) So, I´ll begin with several comments on the background to the project, then I´ll go on to explain how the project works and finally, I´ll highlight what I see as the main advantages of videoconferencing. (2) Good afternoon, everyone. (3) I plan to be brief, it´ll take some 15 minutes. (4) I´m Tom Lukes, a postgraduate student of Information Science. (5) This morning I´m going to be talking to you about the videoconferencing project. (6) Thanks for coming. (7) The aim of this presentation is to get more people involved in the project. (8) Feel free to interrupt me, if there’s something which needs clarifying, but don´t worry, there´ll be plenty of time left over for discussion at the end. (9) I will also show you a few bits from the videoconference we had three days ago. Task Introductions can become repetitive. It is important to have a choice of words and expressions at your fingertips. Use one of the following expressions to replace each of the expressions in italics in this introduction. don’t hesitate a chance I take care I’m delighted sections divide go through in more depth my purpose is finally Good morning, everyone. If I may have your attention, please? Thank you for coming. It’s a pleasure to be with you today. My name is Emma Gold and I’m in charge of the Department library. We are here today to review some key principles and to get information about the loan system. So what I intend to do is to break down this presentation into three parts, first, the system and its rules; second, benefits, and third, the e-loans. If you have any questions, please, feel free to interrupt me, but I should also say there’ll be an opportunity to discuss issues at greater length after my talk. 3. MAIN BODY The body is the 'real' presentation. If the introduction was well prepared and delivered, you will now be 'in control'. You will be relaxed and confident. The body should be well structured, divided logically, with plenty of carefully spaced visuals. Remember these key points while delivering the body of your presentation: a. do not hurry b. do not read from your notes c. be enthusiastic d. give time on visuals e. maintain eye contact f. modulate your voice g. keep to your structure h. signpost throughout i. remain polite when dealing with difficult questions 4. VISUALS AND AIDS Task Look at the visuals below and try to characterize their qualities. 1. NATIONALISM There are four core debates which permeate the study of nations and nationalism. - Nationalists argue that nations are timeless phenomena. - The next major school of thought is that of the perennialists who argue that nations have been around for a very long time. - Postmodernists and Marxists also play in the larger debates surrounding this topic, the modernization school is perhaps the most prevalent scholarly argument at the moment. These scholars see nations as entirely modern and constructed. 2. LEARNING THROUGH EXPERIENCE Do exercise, carry out task Plan, try out, Describe, reflect, make decisions feed back Think, draw parallels EXPERIENTIAL LEARNING CYCLE Some useful DON‘TS: a) Don’t use visuals to repeat what you can say with words. b) Don’t overcrowd visuals with too much information. c) Don’t use too many visuals. d) Don’t read from the visuals. 5. ACADEMIC STYLE Academic speaking is similar in many ways to academic writing, however, it is less complex and objective than written language. Spoken language has shorter words, less grammatical complexity, it is lexically less dense and it has a less varied vocabulary. Spoken language is different from written language for many reasons. One important reason is that it usually has to be understood immediately whereas written language can be read many times. Although the structure should be formal, the most effective speaking manner is usually conversational style (but not too familiar): use short sentences and concrete language to give examples. Task What is the most efficient way of communicating ideas to your audience? (Choose the best answer) a) formulate each complete thought in a short sentence of 15-20 words. b) formulate more thoughts in a short sentence of 15-20 words. c) formulate your complete thought in a sentence of more than 40 words. d) formulate more thoughts in a sentence of more than 40 words. Task Spoken language has many different features: tick those which characterize spoken language. 1) Variation in speed 2) Spelling 3) Gestures - body language 4) Intonation 5) Paragraphs 6) Stress and rhythm 7) Pausing and phrasing 8) Formal Grammatical Precision 6. CONCLUSION The ending, similarly to the opening, is a vital element of an oral academic presentation. It helps create the final impression on what you have been talking about and it is also the part most likely to be remembered by the audience. The final section should reinforce and re-emphasize the main points of your speech or highlight the importance of specific ideas you have presented. Such a summary will be followed by a conclusion, which is an original idea drawn from effective arguments. Use the conclusion to: 1. Sum up 2. Conclude 3. Thank your audience 4.Invite questions Task Make full sentences by matching the correct halves. a) Before we come to an end, 1. there are two key theories. b) I’d be glad to answer 2. we start the discussion now. c) To summarize, 3. by quoting a well-known saying. d) We can conclude 4. we should try the second method. e) In my opinion, 5. your questions now. f) I’d like to suggest 6. I’d like to thank you for your attention. Task Use one of the following expressions to replace each of the expressions in bold in the following conclusion. I’d be glad talk then main lastly reliable now idea covers everything in As you can see it seems to me that listening sum up to put it simply That brings me to the end of my presentation. Let me just run over the key points again. Very briefly, there are three. First, water-related problems continue to affect millions of people and, contrary to what most people believe, future water supplies will not last for ever. Second, the growing number of projects trying to provide ever-increasing supplies of water indicate that a growing number of countries are aware of the present problems and of those to come. Third, current solutions are mostly highly expensive, not very practical and also very time-consuming. From what you have heard, there are some very good reasons to believe that the eventual solution would definitely be to conserve water worldwide and control pollution. In other words, we need to respect our most valuable natural resource much more than we do. At this point, I’d like to leave you with the following thought: it is certainly true that the twentieth century gave us some advantages by, for example, making us richer, healthier and freer to enjoy our lives. However, in my opinion, it did not make us wiser. The twentieth century also made our earth dirtier, our people less humane, and our spiritual lives poorer. We should, of course, continue to enjoy the benefits of technological advancements because they free us to pursue our interests and goals. However, we must make a concerted effort to preserve our natural environment for future generations. Thank you for your attention and now, if you have any questions, I’d be pleased to answer them. Appendix “Sign Posting” Language Giving Talks and Presentations 1 Introducing Good morning, my name is … I’m a … (student … ) at … (Masaryk University) This morning I’m going to … (talk about …) Today I’d like to … (describe …) The focus^6 / topic / subject of my talk / paper is … The aim of my presentation this morning is to … (explain …) I’ve divided my presentation into … We can break this area down into the following fields ... My talk will be in … (three parts.) First, I’d like to (give you an overview of …) Second, I’d like to focus on^7 … Then, I’ll move on^8 to … After that, we’ll deal with^9 … Finally, we’ll consider^10 … 2 Referring to questions Feel free to interrupt me if there’s anything you don’t understand / you need clarifying. If you don’t mind, we’ll leave questions till the end. 3 Introducing each section So, let’s start with … (objectives …) Now let’s move on to … (the next part …) Let’s turn our attention to … (the question of …) This leads me to … (my third point …) Finally … (let’s consider …) 4 Summarizing a section Let me just run over the key points again. I’ll briefly summarise the main issues That completes my … (description of …) To sum up … So, to summarize … (there are five key points …) 5 Referring backwards and forwards I mentioned earlier … (the importance of …) I’ll say more about this later. We’ll come back to this point later. 6 Checking understanding Is that clear? Are there any questions? 7 Referring to visual information slide This diagram shows … screen If you look at this graph you can see … What is interesting in this slide is … I’d like to draw your attention to …(this chart …) 8 Referring to common knowledge As you know … As I’m sure you’re aware … 9 Concluding / justification As you can see, there are some very good reasons … I’d like to leave you with the following thought / idea … In conclusion … I hope you’ve gained an insight into … 10 Inviting questions and dealing with questions If you have any questions, I’d be pleased / I’ll do my best to answer them. I would welcome any comments or suggestions. That’s a good point. I’m glad you asked that question. Can I get back to you on that later? I’m afraid I don’t have … (the information at present). I’m afraid I’m not the right person to answer that. 11 Closing That concludes my talk. That brings me to the end of my presentation. That completes my presentation. Thank you for your attention / listening. Presentation Assessment Criteria 1. Organisation - title - introduction - main body (key points, logical sequence, sign-posting language) - ending (conclusion) - closure - timing 2. Content - topic coverage - relevant to academic audience - informative - understandable - interesting, entertaining 3. Language - appropriate to audience - explanation of jargon - voice (speed, volume, clarity, intonation) - grammatical accuracy - correct pronunciation of key words 4. Body language - eye contact - use of notes - stance, enthusiasm 5. Visuals - appropriate - supportive - clear 6. Questions - handling of the discussion - clear, appropriate responses 7. Complex impression - the best feature/part/characteristics - one feature that should be changed/avoided/improved