Comment Sheet for First Drafts

                           Writing Sociology (SOC470/776) · Spring 2009

                                           Student name


                                                UČO


                                         Essay assignment

                                           Reviewer name

                                          Reviewer e-mail




                STRUCTURE   Appropriate format, logical organization, clear thesis

                                        Quantitative review

                                            Strengths:


                                             Structure


                                   1    2    3    4    5    N/A

                                             Analysis


                                   1    2    3    4    5    N/A

                                      Suggested improvements:


                                          Use of evidence


                                   1    2    3    4    5    N/A

                   ANALYSIS   Use and interpretation of evidence, data, examples

                                            Strengths:


                                         Use of citations


                                   1    2    3    4    5    N/A

                                      Suggested improvements:


                                          Use of English


                                   1    2    3    4    5    N/A

                 STYLE   Vocabulary, grammar, punctuation, citations, originality

Key:

1 = Outstanding

2 = Good quality

3 = Satisfactory

4 = Needs revision

5 = Needs extensive revision

N/A = Not applicable

                                            Strengths:


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