Comment Sheet for First Drafts
Writing Sociology (SOC470/776) •••• Fall 2010
Student name UČO
Essay assignment Reviewer name& e-mail
STRUCTURE Appropriate format, logical organization, clear thesis
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ANALYSIS Use and interpretation of evidence, data, examples
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STYLE Vocabulary, grammar, punctuation, citations, originality
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Questions for the Reviewers to Answer
For In-class Peer Review
What is the main point, thesis, or central organizing idea of the paper? Does this need
more definition or clarification?
Is the topic appropriate to the writing assignment? Does it need to be more general or
focused?
What information would help to strengthen the paper?
Are examples, evidence or support needed?
Is the language use good, or are there parts that are difficult to understand? Is the
tone appropriate for the target audience?